ENGL227 Electronic Communication Discussions

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ENGL227 Electronic Communication Discussions
How many of you have read or written personal blogs? How do professional…

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ENGL227 Electronic Communication Discussions

ENGL227 Electronic Communication Discussions

Week 2 Posted by ALL Students 25 Pages 

How many of you have read or written personal blogs? How do professional blogs differ from personal ones? Your office is moving to a new location. Your colleague, David Burke, is not a strong writer, and he knows that you have recently taken a professional writing seminar. He approached you this morning and asked, “Can you read this draft? I know it’s a mess, but I’m swamped with the upcoming move. I want to e-mail it to everyone tomorrow. Can you let me know exactly what’s wrong with it and maybe rewrite it for me?

This draft was exceptionally easier to read. The original draft was choppy and did not read smoothly. He did not emphasize that he did not want any late assignments and for a company that is going through a move, i feel like that is a critical point to make, that even though there is a lot going on, that everyone needs to stay focus. He did a good job at telling his people what he wanted to be done and how things should be done, but it could have been presented much better. He should have gave a bit more direction, and I felt that this particular rewrite did a great job in stating that if there were any further questions that he could be contacted, for example where are the moving boxes, and where should we put our stuff, might be questions that could be asked, he have no option to ask questions…